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PostPosted: Sat Nov 28, 2009 4:28 pm 
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I am trying to do an ETSY shop, but I am having problems writing my descriptions. Can anyone help me? What should I add to my descriptions?

I have my lemon soap up now (could likely use help) . I need to do Lavender, Flowering Herb, peppermint, rosemary peppermint, and a ton of others.

Help!?

ETA: This is the one I have up....I hope it is OK to post a link to my shop.
http://www.etsy.com/view_listing.php?li ... d=35499180

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Lavender - This fragrance is a popular favorite throughout the entire US. Its unisex scent makes it suitable for both a man and a woman. The bar smells like walking through a fresh lavender field in France and will help to turn any bathing experience into a soothing, relaxing one (If you're using an essential oil, you could talk about the properties of Lavender essential oil).

The writing is the hard part for descriptions for sure ... it can take me hours to come up with the ones on the BB site.

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 6:55 am 
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Thanks.

I am so NOT a writer, so this is kinda hard for me!

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I checked out your sight. Good job on getting it going!

Three things that popped out right away (less to do with the descriptions) for me that you might want to consider addressing - even though you mention someone should contact you regarding the shipping fee - that won't stop someone from buying it and they wil not be charged shipping. You really don't want to find youself in that position. You should package your soap in a mailer (or however you plan to package) and weigh it. Find zipcodes N/S/E/W of you on the coasts and see using the USPS how much it would weigh - find the right price and determine what should be charged for (s/h) to ship one soap and setup a shipping profile in the US. One thing I did was poke around at other soap shipping profiles who had similar weight as mine. I then figured it out based on how I packaged and came up with the appropriate fee. I encourage you to take a look at this!

The other thing is the photos - you should try and use up at least 3 photos. - taking from different angles Yes, it's alot of work but it will pay off !!

Tagging - you want to use all tags. Check out my site as an example - I'm still learning and striving but I think you'll see what I mean - with the photos and the tags . www.asliceofelight.etsy.com. Also check out --- http://www.etsy.com/shop/sunbasilgarden - she's got some amazing talent when it comes to displaying her soaps! and her write ups too.

As for the write ups you just have to think about what motivated you to come up with the design and the fragrance - and start typing. Also don't type it in the listing - go to MS word and play around a bit then when you have it copy it over. That might help too. I have trouble too as well but I actually enjoy the description activity. I sometimes I use song bites, phrases or quotes. You'll get the hang after you've done a few.

I hope I was of some help and please take my comments not as a negative critique but as someone who wants to help you succeed!
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Ann Marie, when we use BB fragrances, do you mind if we use your descriptions on our sites? Soap names, not to mention fragrance descriptions, are a real problem. We need all the help we can get!

There is some good advice here. Thank you ladies.

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Hilary,

Thanks for all the advice! I can use all the help I can get, so I am glad for it. :)

I just set my shop on vacation mode as we will be out of state till the new year. That will hopefully give me some time to work everything out in my head.

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Yes, if you're using Bramble Berry products, please use our descriptions. There is no need to re-write what I've slaved over already (ha ha). And if it gives you inspiration to come up with someone on your own, that's great too.

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I personally wouldn't "go there" with talking about the properties of essential oils when selling soap. I know that tons of soapers do it but apparently tons of soapers have never read the FDA regs. The other thing to take into consideration, aside from having your soap regulated as an over the counter drug, is if you ( general "you", not directed at anyone) want the potential liability if a soap doesn't work for a buyer along the lines of the express or implied claims that have been made. Tea Tree and acne or Tea Tree as an anti-fungal, for example.

Sunbasilgarden has some of the most fun, humorous, fresh, concise and interesting descriptions that I've seen. Magic_hands has some terrific ones too.

Good luck with your Etsy shop Robin and Happy Holidays!


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Thanks, Kate.

I am going to work on it over the holidays and hope to have it all re done when I open back up on the 1st. :-)

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